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Where Is Escape?
So much going on
I need to escape
I crawl into bed
Pulling covers over my head.
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I lay there silently
not moving at all
but nothing stops
too much is going on.
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This warm dark cocoon
is not inviting at all
instead of peace and silence
it’s full of invading thoughts.
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A million thoughts
competing in a race,
for my attention
jumping from place to place.
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The escape that I wanted
has escaped from me
a multitude of thoughts
hounding, not letting me be.
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As I drift in and out
my dreams become dark
the worst of me surfaces
my confidence, my purpose drowning
as I awake with a start.
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I try to escape into silence
and restful slumber
instead I’m plagued,
with thoughts louder
than thunder.
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Fears, hopes
uncertainty and dreams
all clamoring and tugging,
my heart and soul want to scream.
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I am tired of searching
I just want to be
I am tired of learning and changing
I want to be free.
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I want my mind to be silent
alive in this moment
I want to feel and experience
love with heaven’s scent.
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Go away thoughts
just let me be.
Let me breathe in this moment,
let my gratefulness and joy become me.
“Where is Escape?” © Susie@NewDayNewLesson
Image:
THE GREAT ESCAPE
© Hryck. | Flickr Creative Commons









Wow – beautifully written. So sorry you had such a rough day. When my thoughts won’t leave me alone- believe it or not – I escape by watching something mindless on T.V.
Thanks. Tv? The thing I want to get rid of?
LOVE this!! What a beautiful poem, Susie. And I can completely relate with your sentiments. I’ve definitely had plently of days like these. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us!! You are a beautiful writer.
I think we’ve all felt that way Susie! Can totally relate. Especially the competing thoughts. You’ve got some really good extended metaphors in here: like the thoughts, you’re description of them competing in a race, jumping from place to place reminded me of the way children run – without purpose, just testing their legs.